Jun 26, 2009

Not Soon Enough

I want to fuck her
at 9am on a Saturday morning
at the bus-stop,
with the grace of hangover delirium running strong.

We can get right outside
and between
every known certainty
of us.

Commentary: Originally the poet deceived himself by writing, "I want to fall in love". Inaccuracy and immaturity are the likely causes. He honestly wanted to fuck the girl at the bustop, and fall in love with her during or afterwards. True, her certainly desired love, but let's not tamper with the obvious carnality of the moment just to keep pure his precious and righteous point of view.

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